The Sword!!!
When we went to the British Museum I saw an ancient Greek Sword that I thought was really cool. Mum said I had to chose one item from the museum to do some descriptive writing about. I decided to choose the sword.
In my drafts I worked on....
- Reading my sentences aloud to myself to make sure they make sense.
- Making sure that all my sentences use the same tense.
- Remembering full stops and capitals.
I have also been working hard on my handwriting, so when I wrote out my final copy, I tried to make it as neat as I could.
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